Posts Tagged ‘The Nine Mothers’

[Writing] 20% Done!

I can’t believe I forgot to post about this when I actually did it. I gave a little bit of a Yattai! when I totalled it up. I topped 20,000 words in The Nine Mothers! Now it actually feels like I can make it! I am not sure about making to to 100K, but I’m pretty sure (judging by what’s happened in the first 20K) that there will be at least 75K before this story has been told.

As of this writing, I’m at 20,253 words total (I have a spreadsheet which does some simple addition since there are two threads to the story which I keep in separate OpenOffice documents).

[Writing] Word Count Wednesday 9/3/08

Fiction Writing This Week: 2,260
Non-Fiction Writing This Week: A bunch

I believe that’s the first time (since I’ve been keeping track) that I’ve topped 2,000 words in a week! I was inspired! I’ve been writing some somewhat tough scenes, too, in that, I already know what happens before and after the scene, but I’m filling in what actually happens so that readers don’t have to make spectacular jumps of logic to follow the story. And in doing so, I am now only 517 words away from 20,000 in The Nine Mothers of White Home. With a goal of 90-100,000 that puts me at 20% done! That actually seems like a decent number.

[Writing] Word Count Wednesday

Now, I didn’t do WCW last week because I was on a schooner, sailing around islands in Maine. I should have been writing (well, at least, I should have been writing more), but instead I read Stephen King’s The Gunslinger. I did at least get through the whole book. And in the mean time (over the past 2 weeks), I wrote 414 words of fiction (for The Nine Mothers). I also got a lot of thinking and note-taking in as well.

And to make this post a little more interesting, here’s a picture I lomo-ized from the trip:

Word Count Wednesday – 6/25

6/18: 187
6/19: 0
6/20: 229
6/21: 0
6/22: 0
6/23: 10
6/24: 290

Last week I mostly had positive comments about the writing… this week, while I got over 700 words, but each of those days when I actually did some writing (not counting the 23rd), the time was spent on a different project. So, despite getting over 100 words a day (hey, it’s something), really each project is only getting 34 words per day. Which means that to get any of them to 90,000 words, it will take me 7.25 years. And since I’m working on all 3 simultaneously, that puts the end date about 21 years away. I’m fairly certain this is my subconscious way of continuing my normal mode of operation; that being: start doing something, don’t finish (or only work hard enough to get somewhat decent at a skill), and move on.

Change Itself

First, let me pat myself on the back by saying that I’m up to 13,791 words (or 350,000 in manuscript words) for Hear the Grass Grow.

Now, let me take myself back down that peg, and a couple more for good measure, by saying that I am 207 words behind my average daily goal. And considering I started keeping track on February 18th, that is almost 2.5 months worth of 200 words a day, or… 15,000 words.

Next, on to the actual point of the post: Change. I’m almost 14,000 words into a story that I’m fairly happy with so far (and I’m not quitting on yet!) but I’m contemplating a change that would move the whole time line of the story back 40-50 years. If this were my Space Opera “The Nine Mothers” then 40-50 years would be nothing since the entire universe there is a complete fabrication. But HtGG is set in the “near-future” – currently 100 years in the future.

If we compare 2008 to 1908, obviously a lot has changed, but really, the biggest societal change that I see is the invention of TV. And Hear the Grass Grow is more about society than science (at least I hope it is). So now the real point of the post: I don’t want to have to make up some fresh, new idea about what technology is going to be like 100 years from now. I want to dabble in that a bit, because it’s fun, but the story is more about the characters and how their lives are affected by the events that take place in the story, more than how the technology of the time has changed, or how that new technology affects them.

I believe it’s a good thing that I’m writing my story/novella/novel/whatever in this manner, because most of the guidelines for submission to SFF magazines specify that they prefer character-driven stories.

Don’t get me wrong, I want to create worlds that are completely different from (yet somehow so similar to) our own; I want to dream up fascinating new technology; I want to be innovative. I just don’t think this is the story in which I want to – and perhaps can not – do that.

And from the standpoint of a still-aspiring author, having gleaned what knowledge and wisdom I can from the actually-published authors whom I read on a daily basis, changing it is good. I think the general advice goes: You’re most likely going to end up rewriting most of what you’re currently writing anyway. So if a key set piece or setting date needs changing, it’s better to do it at 14,000 words than at 50,000 words. Now, back to contemplating my spreadsheet with the new dates…

And yes, the comment about TV is meant to be somewhat inflammatory, but also thought-provoking, and perhaps even comment-worthy.

Word Count 3/23 – Easter Sunday

Tracer Photo:

Pikniked Mariachis

So, I was off on vacation for part of last week and the week before. In the realistic part of my mind, I knew that I wouldn’t have time to come up with 10,000 words, even if I had brought my computer. Okay, maybe I thought somehow it would get done. Note the passive verb there.

I knew I’d have time on the plane, and at least one day while my wife was prepping for the wedding (she was a bridesmaid). And that was exactly the amount of time I had. I think it was a self-fulfilling prophecy kind of thing going on. I probably could have made more time if I’d really tried.

Anyway, in the 6 days we were gone, I got 1,114 words written for part of The Nine Mothers in my little Moleskine notebook. (avg: 186 words/day) Of course, writing by hand slowed me down to about 50% of my speed as compared to using a computer. I kind of thought it would slow me down more than that…

Of course, now that I’m back, I’ve decided to go back to working on a project I’ve been trying to do since high school. It’s gone through at least four different titles, but I believe my official title is now: Hear the Grass Grow, Sound the Ringing Horn. In the past two days (aka this weekend), I’ve written 848 words for that one. I think that’s pretty good considering I went out to lunch, took a nap, and went to a party yesterday, and then today was at church, followed by visiting family, followed by preparing for the coming work week.

I’ll get into more details about HtGG (as I now call it) when I actually get closer to releasing it into the wild.

Friday Snippets: Does anyone do this anymore?

I seem to remember having 4-5 blogs that posted pieces of WIPs on Fridays… but I only saw one in the feed reader today… that one was enough to remind me that I actually have some good WIP to post now, though. So, hooray for that. And here goes (with the disclaimer, of course)…

This is © copyright 2008 by me, Nels Wadycki. I hope this doesn’t mean I’m giving up the first publishing rights. But then, it’s first draft stuff, and will probably be completely reworked, but hopefully not thrown away.

Not Even A Mouse

Josephine awoke to the high pitched, staccato beeps that White Home tended to make when he was straining to compute something. She was ten floors below the AI’s main work room on Sky Mountain Station, but the sounds carried through the ventilation shafts, and Josephine was a light sleeper. She flipped the covers back with a sigh, and went out to catch an elevator up to the Brain Stem.

The Secure 2 Area was always pretty quiet at night, and the ambient noise actually as the elevator drew her into Secure 1.

The strained chirps echoed down the hallway as she stepped from the elevator and headed toward White Home’s usual night spot. The passage was dark, but she’d learned to navigate it easily over the years.

The beeping was cut off as she approached the doorway, and she could see that several output screens went dark as the pools of light on the walls and floor of the hall got dimmer.

Josephine turned into the room and caught a glimpse of star maps, mathematical proofs, and historical logs for a galaxy she couldn’t identify. They were cleared to black before she could make out anything more.

“Good morning, Josephine. You’re up early.”

“Yeah, I just heard some odd noises, and came up to make sure you weren’t watching porno girls or something.”

“Ha ha ha. No, just a bad dream.”

It was her turn to laugh. “What were you thinking about?”

“Oh, nothing, really. Just looking for gaps in galactic history for a few places.”

And the mathematical proofs were what?

“You know, I can’t run heavy simulations all day. Have to give me processors a rest sometimes.”

“Yes, I know. Can I see any of it?”

“Actually, I’d just about finished. But since you’re up, would you like to run through some of the networks I’d computed earlier?”

AIs were never as good at lying as the best humans. But they were better than the worst. It made it hard to tell if one was actually lying, or just being mechanical.

“It’s not too long before you go home for your coming-of-age ceremony.”

“Yeah, but I won’t even be gone that long for that.”

“Yes, but as you know, my work is never done. I may issue a sleep thread, or do some historical fact-checking, but I can’t take a month-long break no matter how long I’ve been in existence.”

“You’ve got a point there.”

Josephine did want to get a little more sleep, but she could sleep when she was on vacation. Right now – and as always – there was work to be done.

She keyed in her password, scanner her retina and fingerprint in one swift motion, and plopped into her chair.

“I don’t know how much I can do right now. I’m still a bit groggy,” she said as she jacked into the system. It scanned her vitals and took her to her normal place inside White Home’s knowledge space.

“That’s okay,” the AI replied, “Your brainwaves will probably be enough for me to work with for a while.”

“I don’t know if I’ll ever be over getting creeped out when you talk about my brainwaves.”

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