Monthly Archives: October 2008

Candyween

No word count this week. Not cause I didn’t write. There were words. Just, they were all longhand in my softcover Moleskine notebook (which, as the reviews on Amazon will confirm, starts falling apart upon opening).

There was an important development in the writing arena this week, though. I got up the nerve/guts/gumption to go to the Chicago SciFi (or Spec Fic) Writers Meetup. Since there were a bunch of new people (and some people who’d been going), and a new Organizer, we basically set rules for submissions and critiques, laying the foundation of a new critique group. It’s a pretty good mix of writers, so hopefully it’ll help juice the creativity as well as getting a good variety of eyes on my work (and my eyes on a good variety of work).

Proof that the Terminator theme makes anything awesome

Via Everyday Should Be Saturday:

I don’t really care all that much about college football (though I do watch a couple games every couple of weeks, and I will sit up and pay attention if Oregon or Illinois are doing well), but even watching a slide show of players that I don’t know makes the hair on my neck stand up when it’s paired with the Terminator theme.

In which am inspired by and subsequently taken down by Chris Roberson

From a MIND MELD on SF Signal re: the Future of Written SF:

I’d love to see more people playing what Rudy Rucker calls the “power chords” of science fiction. He describes these as “those classic SF topes that have the visceral punch of heavy musical riffs.” The list includes: Blaster guns, spaceships, time machines, aliens, telepathy, flying saucers, warped space, faster-than-light travel, immersive virtual realities, clones, robots, teleportation, alien-controlled pod people, endless shrinking, the shattering of planet Earth, intelligent goo, antigravity, generation starships, ecodisaster, pleasure-center zappers, alternate universes, nanomachines, mind viruses, higher dimensions, a cosmic computation that generates our reality and, of course, the attack of the giant ants.

I want more of that stuff. The good stuff, the fun stuff. The mind-expanding thought-experiments and heady adventure stories.

As the present more and more becomes yesterday’s science fiction, I think the genre does itself a disservice to retreat to safer, more “mundane” near-future extrapolation. There’s a place for it, certainly, and I wouldn’t dream of gainsaying any writer who wants to till those fields, but for me I think that we need to be looking farther ahead, widening our vision instead of narrowing it.

This is the Inspiration segment. The novel I’m currently working on fits very well with the list above. Well, at least the first half of the list. Then, reading on, I realize that Roberson is really actually focusing on the second half of the list:

Ian McDonald recently opined that “the aquifer of hopes and fears that SF has been drawing from so long is running dry.” He needs new dreams, as his old ones don’t enchant him any more. He’s looking for the next Big Idea. McDonald is talking specifically about making SF relevant to modern readers, in a way that “Spaaaaaaceship! Fiction” of the 20th Century doesn’t really anymore. He runs up the flag for the Multiverse, and casts a glance at the Singularity, Nanotech, the environment, and others. It didn’t escape my notice how many of those are on Rucker’s list of SF power chords.

Yeah, so… so much for: Blaster guns, spaceships, time machines, aliens, telepathy, flying saucers, warped space, faster-than-light travel, immersive virtual realities, clones, robots, and teleportation, eh? Oops. Well, I’m going to continue to write my fairly Spaaaaaaaaceshippy fiction because at some point, I need to have finished something, and I think I’ve got something that’s at least a little bit new there. Maybe it’s not a mind-expanding thought-experiment, but it’s definitely a heady adventure.

Lost Season 5 Trailer

Thanks to Chris Roberson I know it’s there… somewhere… Luckily I watched it on YouTube before it got “removed by the user.”

Not sure why ABC doesn’t have it on their LOST page. They do have 3 alternate endings to watch, though if memory serves me, only 2 of them are actually alternate endings.

I’m thinking maybe when it actually premieres in another 2 months that I’ll be ready to watch it again. I think part of it will depend on if the shows I’m currently watching are still running new episodes at that point. And, of course, if my wife is into it.

[Writing] In which another person says first drafts aren't final drafts

Charles Stross has finished the first draft of a book. This is not all that notable seeing as how he is a professional writer. What is good to note is that he reiterates one of the fundamental things that new writers (like myself) must bludgeon into the thick (at least in my case) skulls:

When a novel is finished in first draft, it’s not yet publishable.

I just finished reading an essay by Anne Lamont contained within the textbook: Writing Fiction (mentioned here), which expands upon that concept for several pages.

Unlike most processes which follow the Crap In -> Crap Out axiom, the writing process takes crap in, but somewhere along the way in the revision process, the crap is turned into gold. At least, that’s usually the idea.

[Writing] Do you?

I have just started reading Writing Fiction: A Guide to Narrative Craft by Janet Burroway and in the opening chapter she provides a nugget of insight that new writers (as though I am not one) need drilled into them before they waste as much time I did trying to copy someone else’s process before realizing each writer has to create their own:

The mundane daily habits of writers are apparently fascinating. No author offers to answer questions at the end of a public reading without being asked: Do you write in the morning or at night? Do you write every day? Do you compose longhand or on a computer? Sometimes such questions show a reverent interest in the workings of genius. More often, I think, they are a plea for practical help: Is there something I can do to make this job less horrific? Is there a trick that will unlock my words?

Burroway goes on to list seven different authors with seven different writing processes.

So, here’s my advice, as one who’s taken far too long to ramp up to the actual process of writing fiction: Stop spending your time Googling to try to figure out what your favorite writers do to create their works of fiction. Instead, spend that time coming up with your own process. For every hour you spend looking to see if someone writes their drafts longhand, that’s an hour you could have been writing longhand to see if that works for you. So – again, from someone who’s spent far too long asking questions – stop trying to find others’ answers to your questions, and start making your own answers.

TV Talk: Heroes … of the Future and the Ensemble Cast

Since I’m so sure everyone cares what I think about the TV shows I watch (or should I call them Laptop shows since I watch them all on Hulu?).

I almost gave up on Heroes last week. It probably seems like I only write about shows when I feel like quitting them, but there is evidence that refutes that.

Anyway – there’s two main reasons why I felt like (and still do feel like – perhaps moreso now) giving up on Heroes.

1. The Vision of the Future is Not Clear. If this were real life, then, duh, the future wouldn’t be clear, and that’s just the way it is. But this is a TV show where some characters can travel through time and others can paint the future. Season One worked because we had a clear idea of what was going to happen in the future: There was going to be a nuclear (note to Sarah Palin: it’s pronounced noo-klee-ur) bomb in New York City. Easy enough. Very clear.

Move on to Seasons Two and Three: I have no idea. Maybe I’m just dense. But I don’t know what the writers’ and/or producers’ vision of the future is in Heroesland. Clearly there is some Grave Threat in the form of people acquiring super powers, and maybe massacring each other… But so far, all I can remember seeing is Future Peter showing Present Day Peter that people can fly, and the only ones who seem to have a problem with it are Future Peter and Future Claire. Yeah, there’s also the part where Hiro goes into the future (when he is killed by Ando) and everyone is going crazy, but that was just a short little jaunt through time, and the future seems so fluid and malleable in the Heroverse, that it’s hard to know if that future is even still going to happen.

Now, I do get that some of this future we see is supposed to be shrouded in mystery, but I feel like the Grave Threat should be made very clear, even if (and perhaps explicitly because) we don’t know exactly how it started and/or how it got to be the Grave Threat that it is in the future. I think I’m also annoyed and/or confused at how they keep changing the nature of the Grave Threat. I suppose it’s more comic book-like to have a new danger every season, but when everyone keeps changing the future, it makes it hard to worry that a given future is actually going to happen.

This issue is crystallized (and made more upsetting) by the fact that on the same night (for those who actually watch live TV) you can watch Terminator: The Sarah Connor Chronicles (TSCC) which has a very clearly defined Grave Threat which doesn’t change. Even though the way in which it becomes the Grave Threat seems to change, we still have the same Grave Threat we’ve had since the opening scene of the first Terminator. Of course, the entire show, and really the entire point of everything Terminator-related, is based around the fact that we don’t know exactly how the future gets to be the future. (In the show, they are even growing turmoil within John Connor regarding the fact that no matter what he does, it seems that the future never changes)

It seems like Heroes is trying a similar tactic with its mystery by making the show center around trying to find out how and why the future ends up like it does, but in TSCC, it’s so much more clear why finding out is actually important.

2. Too many people. Here’s the list of characters from Heroes that I can name off the top of my head:
Parkman
Hiro & Ando
Peter
Nathan
Trish Strauss (Nikki’s sister)
Linderman
Noah Bennet
Claire Bennet
Sylar
Mohinder
Molly
Angela
Parkman’s Dad
The Haitian
Adam Monroe
Elle (who’s dead now… or is she?)
and now Arthur Petrelli

And the not so important, but maybe important, people:
Micah (even though he’s only been in one episode)
Claire’s Mom
Claire’s Biological Mom
Mya
Daphne
Knox
Peter’s girlfriend who got stuck in the future and we never hear about again
Trish & Nikkie’s sister (who we haven’t even met yet)

That’s at least 17 important people (taking out the “throw away” people) that you have to know about. LOST had close to that many important characters, but they were much more stratified in their levels of importance. You could not know much about a bunch of the people on LOST and still get by. But if you don’t know something about one of those main people on Heroes, your ability to keep up and be continually entertained will diminish rapidly.

For a quick comparison (again with TSCC):
Sarah Connor
John Connor
Derrick Reese
Cameron
Agent Ellison

And to compare to my other two shows, Chuck and Fringe:
Chuck
Sarah
Morgan
Casey
Ellie (?)
Captain Awesome
BuyMore employees who are mostly there for comic relief

I count four important people and maybe five if you cout Ellie.

Olivia
Peter
Walter
Olivia’s Dead-being-kept-alive-former-boyfriend
Agent Broyles (I guess JJ Abrams liked Lance Reddick in LOST)

Once again four to five important people (sorry Astrid, Agent Sidekick, and CEO Lady who reminds me way too much of Shirley Manson in TSCC).

There’s three shows with manageable cast sizes that leave me with enough Care for everyone involved. Heroes is not only stretching the Care a little thin, but the characters also sometimes make me not want to try to make it work.

Must Be Fall

Because there is all of a sudden a bunch of new music that I want coming out, and a slew (a slew!) of video games as well. Of course, this works well with the timing of my birthday, but it also means that I have to choose between things like:

The Killers – Day & Age
Snow Patrol – A Hundred Million Suns
The Streets – Everything Is Borrowed

All of which sound awesome from what I’ve heard of them so far.

and

Gears of War 2
Blitz: The League II
Fallout 3
The Last Remnant

and

Things I’ve been wanting since before I’d heard of most of what’s listed above, like a couple Bulls hats, a new Moleskine notebook, etc., etc.

Oh, the agony of such decisions.